Annie On Writing

August 31, 2009

My Writing Goals 2009 August

Filed under: Writing Tools — Annie @ 10:53 pm

Every month, I report in on my writing goals – being kept accountable by writing buddies Paul and Jodi ( who also usually beat me with their posts each month.

Get a regular writing gig either print or internet
Still writing weekly for Type A Mom and Write Anything. Type A Mom has really lost its glamour for me. After six months of weekly articles – which on the whole I think have been well thought out and researched – combined with a large amount of hits many of the articles have had – only to see my ‘payments’ in the single dollars. I will continue as they have changed (relaxed) the rules for Editors (which is the title I dubiously hold) We now only have to submit an article every fortnight – and these only need to be 400 words – rather than the tomes I have previously submitted. I really enjoy the Write Anything column as it still pushes me to think about different aspects of my craft and above all makes me feel like I have something worthy of saying – especially when I get comments from the vast internet audience.

My challenge each month I report in is to find roles which actually pay me. I have opened my opportunities up to the universe … and I just have to smile when it is answered – perhaps in ways which I did not expect.

Firstly – its not a paid job … well yet – or even if it will be….…. Cutting along story short – 10 years ago a Russian writer traveled through Australia on camel. He stopped in a Dalveen and was picked up ( my parents have a habit for adopting strays) by my folks. He stayed with them for three days and got some ‘Aussie Culture and Hospitality’ – he then wrote about it – and published his travel log in Russian. Anyway – he also published a few bits from it on a website ( which is all in Russian) however strangely enough – the only bit in English was about his visit with my folks…the way I actually found this site is a story on its own. ANYWAY.. there were a few details in there that weren’t right ( names of people, details about livestock and dingos habits etc) I navigated a Russian site – hoped I’d filled in the right form and pressed the right buttons and sent him a message. The next day I got an email back from him saying he wanted to publish his book in English and would I be willing to rewrite the section (1 chapter) with my knowledge on sheep and hunting habits of dingos – and he would expand the chapter into two chapters as he felt it was an important part of the journey and about Australia. In 1995 he traveled across the US on a wagon and wrote about that. I can’t find much more in English about him – so it will be an interesting twist but worth looking at – So – I have an opportunity….and it’s a bit exciting.

Fiction Friday every week
Have kept posting every week – nearly blew it last week – but saved by a Limerick ( theres got to be a story in that….)

I have been giving every posting on FF considered critiques each week – but last week ( as yet) have not been on to do this. I’m not sure if it even means anything to the other writers – but its pushing me to look beyond niceties and give authentic feedback – hopefully bringing our FF to be a prompt which other writers want to be involved in – rather than a club where we all say how jolly nice we all are ( not that it is that at the moment – but with any group who become comfortable with each other – it has the potential)

I set a target last month to write my FF in a new genre each week – this has opened up possibilities for me and given me a lot of pleasure seeking, researching and reading snippets of new styles. I’ve opened up the suggestions for my next genre to anyone who cares to leave a message on my blog….

Enter 4 short story comps this year.

Last month I had thought to submit some chapters of my NaNo – but after attending the writers festival I can now see how woefully far away that manuscript is from submission. I was flung between despair and elation and seriously thought of packing in the whole idea of being a writer. I still believe the message and my ability as a writer with that manuscript, I just seriously need to rewrite it. I have also made the decision not to post it up on line any further.

Along with this I also realized I was missing a big part or focus in my story. Its now not surprising that I couldn’t keep going with it because of this ( hindsight is such a great thing.) I am undertaking a feminine energy course called Mothersong – tracing the maternal line and energetics. There are so many ‘uhh huhs’ and I am getting excited about integrating what I am uncovering with my rewite and editing of my novel.

SUBMISSIONS
I branched out a bit and submitted some samples of my work in article writing for a site which purported to pay per article as well as a profit share thing per click. I think that I didn’t give it as much attention as I aught to have as I was a bit confronted when I got a terse note back saying that I didn’t meet one of the criteria they listed ( it was for a parenting section I was applying for) I apparently don’t either have the educational or life qualifications or/ and write in too relaxed a style unsuited to a formal setting. Sigh. Might be better off if that’s their attitude. I had a moment of huge ego crashing down, got over myself and carried on.

This month I entered my short story – first written for Getting Hitched ( a dating site) – Dance to a Different Beat – in http://accomplicepress.ning.com/forum/topics/curvalicious-writing-contest?xgs=1 the Curvalicious writing contest. It ends not in 2009 as it says – but in Jan 2010.

Attend Byron Writers Festival as well as at least 2 professional development workshops
My goodness – what a fantastic experience that was! A great mix of how tos, sessions with writers – getting inside their heads on what motivated them to write what they did and sessions which were for the pure joy of learning something new.

Read one book a month

Have taken this a further step finally after my pathetic attempts in the past months. This month I read five and a half!.

I finally started ( and finished within 24 hours) Wilbur Smiths newest book – The Quest. I have collected and loved his books since I was 15 – is it just me or has he completely sold out? Pages of pap and description, fluffy nothing and wasted words. The only reason I kept going was that I have read all his books and just couldn’t NOT read this one. It was predictable, suspended any thread of belief that one could have had within a few pages and very disappointing….AND he is still famous, rich and well respected….. ( not in my house any longer)

I have wanted to start looking into the genre I want to explore for my NaNo – creepy horror – and who better to model oneself on ? Stephan King. Having never read one of his books I grabbed the first few I saw – Nightmares and Dreams , Geralds Game and Needful Things. I have seen the Televison/ film adaptations of Night Flyer and The Stand – and was suitably creeped out by both.

Needful Things was gripping, kept you uncomfortably at the edge of your seat and well crafted. Geralds Game, on the other hand bored me to tears and I think better off as a short story than prolonged into the mindless tome it was published. The main characters continued angst about her past made me wish the dog would come and eat her – rather than make me feel any more empathy.
Nightmares and Drams is a collection of short stories – interestingly, the best ( creepiest) ones are told from a first person stance.
I guess what I got from reading three random books from an author I have heard so much about and whose work is revered by many, is that anyone can have a crap book – he just happens to be able to sell it. ( Same goes for Mr Smith)

I also thought I’d like to have a crack at the one Brisbane Short Story comp next year – so have this years anthology and ploughing through it at great knots. I’d hoped to have finished it by tonights post – but still have 4 to go. I loved the collection – some really great pieces. I was also pleased to see authors there whom I had heard speak at Byron Bays Festival.

Participate and complete NaNoWriMo
Preparing with more reading and research into nightmares and what frightens people (thus the Stephan King focus this month)

Focus on building “Reclaim”, Continue writing Captain Juan, Anthology 2008
Nothing looked at in these spaces for a while. Will stop reporting this.

Anthology now makes me feel sick thinking about – my lack of integrity and responsibility in upholding this goal. This above most other things makes me feel worse about myself than any other action ( or non action I have undertaken this year)

August 26, 2009

Writing Paranormal Romance

Filed under: Writing Tools — Annie @ 12:01 am

This Post first appeared over at Write Anything.

Paranormal romance seems to be the flavour of the year, with the huge influx in romance stories filled with demons, werewolves, shape shifters, the ubiquitous vampire, superheros, Gods and other fantastic creatures. Vampire porn has simmered in the background of erotic romance for years, but it has enjoyed a renewed interest after the Cullens were thrust into the limelight. Although it may seem saturated, the market is always keen for more paranormal romance with the key having a new angle, a new twist or take on the world and beings which inhabit it. The fascination of allure of the dark, dangerous realms in which the paranormal exists is a huge drawcard for many readers; especially if there is forbidden love involved. If, as a writer you decide to dip your fountain pen into its murky depths, then there are certain rules which you must adhere to.

The Vampire
Vampire Lust   Image via Wikipedia

As with any story, there are major elements of a story which act as the adhesive for the plot.
Strong characters with strong motivation to their decisions and actions (which may be hidden or teased out gradually depending on how you like to introduce them)
Strong elements of conflict. Within romance, this needs to be a simmering pot of emotions.
However add to the pot -
Thorough research or definitions to your paranormal rules
Consistency within your paranormal rules.

Character Building
There has been ample information shared about building characters, fleshing out their desires, emotions, fears, likes and dislikes. Look specifically at the species (the supernatural or paranormal creature you create) and its definitions and life rules. Paranormal beings tend to be drawn upon human characteristics. This is particularly important for the romantic hero/heroine of your story, so that your readers can relate, lust or hunger after them.

Conflict
Creating conflict within paranormal stories is extremely enjoyable, adding a romantic twist to it make it even more delightful. It gives the audience the chance to completely abandon their mundane life and wander into new worlds and be enchanted and seduced by new beings. It a chance to ‘suspend disbelief, so ensure that there is enough simmering conflict to keep the story and romance rolling.

There are many types of interesting situations to explore explosive chemistry between subspecies and research or thorough character class definition is the key to believability. The most common is for a paranormal being to fall in love ( or the other way round) with a human and for this love to be rejected by one or the others society – or for them to keep it a secret from all but the reader.

Consistency
You may choose to make up a sub species or superhero character for your story. If you use a creature with an established mythology, like the vampire or werewolf, ensure you do extensive research on their capabilities. Nothing kills a paranormal story quicker than inconsistencies within mythology, and some readers get very precious about the ‘known’ knowledge of some beings. You can of course fly in the face of superstitious knowledge and create your own rules ( thanks Stephanie Meyer with sunlight and vampires)

Create your own world and be consistent with the rules you set. If you borrow from other worlds or myths, ensure your angle or idea is constant the entire way through your story. Be mindful of the physicality of your beings, especially if they become romantically involved with a human. Tentacles, wings and other appendages may get in the way of love making or present a completely unbelievable scenario.

Write from your passion. Don’t focus on fads and what’s ‘hot at the moment – write from your bliss and stay consistent with that.

Continue to read in the genre you wish to writing in. Look at the things you like and don’t like about books you read. Make notes on the parts you would edit out or how you’d take a character or a scene a step further – if it were your story.

Keep it Simple -Don’t try to introduce too many ‘beings’ within your story – or include a paranormal creature just for the sake of it. They generally don’t live in the same space comfortably in anycase, but tramping a variety of vampires, gnomes, fairies, werewolves, angels, elves, Gods and trolls throughout your text lead to your readers becoming extremely confused.

Where to next?

I’d suggest looking at Zerotime for detailed info on vampires and werewolves.   Paranormal Romance has forums and yahoo groups to discuss romance within science fiction, fantasy, and romantic fiction with paranormal elements, including time travel, futuristic, magical, ghost, vampire and shapeshifter themes.

Bringing a new eye to the genre, a new twist is key to breaking into this growth area in writing. Most importantly, don’t get lost in the paranormal elements of the novel. As always, the main focus is quality writing exploring the romance between the main characters and the development of their relationship. It just so happens that one or the other has certain physicalties or powers which sets them apart from the readers.

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